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But in the things that never last
The starcrossed path I chose that day
Was lined with blood, that led the way
My footsteps sank inside the red
inside my mind, a painful dread
What could come, for all I've done?
Just cut me short; let's end the fun
I can't withstand this pointless game
Just cock the gun, and take your aim
Take my hand, or take my life
or walk away, and watch me cry
I'll drown in tears that never fell
I hold them in, I'll never tell.
This blade might slip and let them seep
And now I'm back to counting sheep
My world becomes a wakeless sleep
For death has made his final reap [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 32 [informant] => DemonQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

wakeless sleep

Contributed by DemonQueen on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:04:13 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My heartbreak lies, not in the past
But in the things that never last
The starcrossed path I chose that day
Was lined with blood, that led the way
My footsteps sank inside the red
inside my mind, a painful dread
What could come, for all I've done?
Just cut me short; let's end the fun
I can't withstand this pointless game
Just cock the gun, and take your aim
Take my hand, or take my life
or walk away, and watch me cry
I'll drown in tears that never fell
I hold them in, I'll never tell.
This blade might slip and let them seep
And now I'm back to counting sheep
My world becomes a wakeless sleep
For death has made his final reap

Copyright © DemonQueen ... [ 2009-11-20 09:04:13]
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Re: wakeless sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:32:14 AM AEST
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This is fantastic Demon!
I really like the way you've cleverly
used such deep force with your words,
casting such pain and suffering into image.
Great read x
Luv Star x x x

Re: wakeless sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Marc_HJSP on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 03:04:55 PM AEST
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Its pretty sad

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