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Estrellas
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 10:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Walk with me, now
Will you?
We can hold hands and
Tell one another stories
We could converse as we walked
We could take a stroll through the park
And as it got dark,
We could walk under the moon and
Through the stars
See, they dangle from silver strings
You would laugh
At something dorky that I'd say
We'd giggle and smile our cheesy smiles
As I'd pull you along,
I would hold you close to me
I could smile at you, and look into your eyes
Then the stars strung around us,
They'd spontaneously combust into fireflies
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Re: Estrellas
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 10:44:45 AM AEST
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Creative! Surprised no one left a comment before. Good imagery. I could see it all happening before my eyes. It's cute.
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