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Array ( [sid] => 154661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bully punch down [time] => 2009-11-02 16:23:59 [hometext] => The bully gets payback [bodytext] => Smack bang in the middle of the rubbish,
Smish, smash, with the clish, clash of the fist bash,
Punch, crunch, with 5 as a bunch ,
Left and right, swish, swosh of air,
Swosh, swish and yank, pull the hair,
To swing and woosh, I’ll smash your moosh,
Get in my way, I’ll bash to decay,
Knock you down, crack on the crown,
Stand tall and proud, I’ll please my crowd,
To see you fall, crush crush so small,
You little man, I’ll watch you frown,
Beaten, trodden, on the floor,
Tired and broken, you’ll fight no more.
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Bully punch down

Contributed by adamski on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 04:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Smack bang in the middle of the rubbish,
Smish, smash, with the clish, clash of the fist bash,
Punch, crunch, with 5 as a bunch ,
Left and right, swish, swosh of air,
Swosh, swish and yank, pull the hair,
To swing and woosh, I’ll smash your moosh,
Get in my way, I’ll bash to decay,
Knock you down, crack on the crown,
Stand tall and proud, I’ll please my crowd,
To see you fall, crush crush so small,
You little man, I’ll watch you frown,
Beaten, trodden, on the floor,
Tired and broken, you’ll fight no more.

Copyright Â© adamski ... [ 2009-11-02 16:23:59]
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Re: Bully punch down (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:55:29 PM AEST
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Oh ouch! You made my bones ache while reading this lol.

I do understand it though, when I was little my brother and I were always getting whooped on because we were small lol, then one day we grew up and did a bit of pay back as well...... Though these days I dont think more violence fixes it ya know?

Liked the high energy and flow to this it seemed like a fight, creative write.

Michelle

Re: Bully punch down (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:02:30 AM AEST
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give the bugger a few alliterative swipes for me, too!. Unexpectedly satisfying.

Spike

Re: Bully punch down (User Rating: 1 )
by simonwrite on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 09:01:45 AM AEST
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i really liked it. good use of sounds and descriptive words. made feel like i was there getting the snot beaten out of me

Re: Bully punch down (User Rating: 1 )
by MorguesMatter on Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 12:08:57 PM AEST
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Made me smile-Morgues

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