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Array ( [sid] => 154294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CRASHED [time] => 2009-10-21 08:42:52 [hometext] => ....she looks not where she should be headed as she crashed into the wall instead.... [bodytext] => Not ever finding any
fairness on the
fence this side of
the wall.

She's not to question
lifes' purpose it's
just there to prevent
her fall.

Where does she go
when she's running
so far away.

Who is she hiding
from or keeping
at bay.

It was never her
intention to take
so much time
to heal.

She's chosen so many
wrong turns daring
the cause for her
appeal.

Broken and confused
she's always left
all on her
own.

Cast aside and
condemned she's
without a road to
be shown.

The stars have dimmed
and the fog has
since set in.

The forest is
frightening as she
dwells on all their
sins.

Guilt and fear
have tripped her
as she's fallen
through the trees.

Begging for some guidance
to understand
to somehow learn
to let it be.

They've all taken
all she's given
and left her nothing
in return.

Except the damaged
wingless pixie
waiting for the
siren's yearn.

Thoughts are now
racing by her
as she's hiding
from the cold.

One put there
to stay inside
the darkness
the other to brave
the daylight bold.

Should she chase
after herself
as the demons
laugh with glee.

For she's discovered
she's her own worst
enemy with no
where left to
flee.

The choking vines
are all around her
and the chasm's
hidden up ahead.

She looks not where
she should be
headed as she
crashed into the
wall instead.


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CRASHED

Contributed by jaeann on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:42:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Not ever finding any
fairness on the
fence this side of
the wall.

She's not to question
lifes' purpose it's
just there to prevent
her fall.

Where does she go
when she's running
so far away.

Who is she hiding
from or keeping
at bay.

It was never her
intention to take
so much time
to heal.

She's chosen so many
wrong turns daring
the cause for her
appeal.

Broken and confused
she's always left
all on her
own.

Cast aside and
condemned she's
without a road to
be shown.

The stars have dimmed
and the fog has
since set in.

The forest is
frightening as she
dwells on all their
sins.

Guilt and fear
have tripped her
as she's fallen
through the trees.

Begging for some guidance
to understand
to somehow learn
to let it be.

They've all taken
all she's given
and left her nothing
in return.

Except the damaged
wingless pixie
waiting for the
siren's yearn.

Thoughts are now
racing by her
as she's hiding
from the cold.

One put there
to stay inside
the darkness
the other to brave
the daylight bold.

Should she chase
after herself
as the demons
laugh with glee.

For she's discovered
she's her own worst
enemy with no
where left to
flee.

The choking vines
are all around her
and the chasm's
hidden up ahead.

She looks not where
she should be
headed as she
crashed into the
wall instead.






Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2009-10-21 08:42:52]
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Re: CRASHED (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 11:34:44 PM AEST
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She is human; she is contemplative. It can be sometimes tough trying to make life's decisions and choice, not knowing if we've done the right thing. Could have done it better? well, perhaps could have done it worse too. We plod on, eh?

I really like the structure of this poem too. Short little stanza like lines with a nice rhyme scheme. A nice style.

Thank you,

Tim
cool dude


Re: CRASHED (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:27:37 AM AEST
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Like Timmy I thought this was great!!!




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