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[sid] => 153691
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Mind Wandering
[time] => 2009-09-28 21:32:30
[hometext] => First attempt at poetry. Wrote it in about twenty minutes. My inspiration is HipHop, specifically Slug from Atmosphere and Grieves. Leave Me feedback please.
[bodytext] => Mind Wandering Pondering life as if he could just speak his mind indulging before their very eyes improvising lies that'll make em' cry Bringing em' to the highest of highs, and to the lowest of lows He awakens hoping to smell the fresh cooked bacon, but was sadly mistaken The path had come to an end the dream was put on hold Say goodbye to all the gold and the riches and say hello to all the cold stupid *****. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 21 [informant] => aaronhalbert [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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