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Weightlight IV (Less Than a Dent)
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 07:10:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Little Weightlight
You had to go
Exit this world
And leave the rest
Less than a dent
We can't all be heroes
Especially so young
You couldn't even
Hope for the best
You couldn't even
Bless the rest
Your heart didn't even
Have time to get big
You didn't even
Have time to give
All that you wanted
You died on the vine
Just an example
Of why words are crime
Less than a dent
Suddenly hopeless
Hopelessly sudden
Modes that defy the time
Less than a dent
I bet that you wished
That you had more time
When you died
Less than a dent.
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xnoybis
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2009-09-28 07:10:26]
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Re: Weightlight IV (Less Than a Dent)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 10:14:17 AM AEST
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I liked it, it was well put together.
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