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Harder to be done then said
I’m trying to balance the scales
Of life but I can’t seem to find a balance

This struggle will be
The end of me
No balance in life
Everything falls apart

Everything I hold close to heart
Just falls from the scale
Balanced shortly once again
But it’s tearing me apart from within

We all try to live a balanced life
For be the scales are always tipped
And my love ones damned to their own crypt
It’s all falling from the scales and breaking apart

I can’t hold it together
I can’t keep a level head
I think I’d be better off me and everyone if I was forever
To rot in the ground dead [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Level Head

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 06:56:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Trying to keep a level head
Harder to be done then said
I’m trying to balance the scales
Of life but I can’t seem to find a balance

This struggle will be
The end of me
No balance in life
Everything falls apart

Everything I hold close to heart
Just falls from the scale
Balanced shortly once again
But it’s tearing me apart from within

We all try to live a balanced life
For be the scales are always tipped
And my love ones damned to their own crypt
It’s all falling from the scales and breaking apart

I can’t hold it together
I can’t keep a level head
I think I’d be better off me and everyone if I was forever
To rot in the ground dead

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-09-19 18:56:40]
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Re: Level Head (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 09:41:29 PM AEST
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Damn nice poem hon, but a damn shame you think people would be better off without you. People (especially friends and relatives) can be thoughtless, mean, vindictive and downright rude at times...and although they might take you for granted at times.....not a single one of them would be better off if you were no longer around.
Most of us have felt in the same situation as yourself while growing up at some stage, but the thing is....things WILL get better. Maybe not tomorrow or next week....maybe not even next year, but they will. Hang in there kid as the day WILL come when you say to yourself "thank God i am still here to see this" .......I promise!

Re: Level Head (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 12:00:44 AM AEST
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Dad gummit, friend, you know I would miss you buntches.
Great writing even tho sad.
big huggs, blessings, luv,
emy

Re: Level Head (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 12:23:19 AM AEST
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P.S.
If it takes a total stranger to tell you that you have worth and would be missed....you would be missed!

Re: Level Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 01:40:41 PM AEST
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so sad... maybe it's just one of those days ya know?
but that's life, u feel this way today and something opposite the next.
life has much, much more to offer than agony.
we spend a lot of time mourning instead of rejoicing.

take care

-K.Z>

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