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[aid] => mick
[title] => IF I COULD.
[time] => 2009-09-16 22:23:54
[hometext] => PLEASE CRITIQUE AND RATE MY POEM.........even negative feedback is better than no feedback at all.
[bodytext] => If i could lay with you, just one time and feel your heart beat next to mine and wrap my arms around you and draw you close to me, and if i could feel your warm embrace and gaze upon your gorgeous face and feel your passion start to rise how ecstatic i would be. If i could make sweet love to you do anything you want me to and have you moan and sigh my name that would be really sweet, but if i could watch you fall asleep and listen to you breathing deep and have you cradled in my arms my life would be complete. J.Kent. 17/2/2003 © [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TsunamiWaverider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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