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Array ( [sid] => 153287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Living End [time] => 2009-09-15 22:11:02 [hometext] => Written on a dull rainy monsoon day. [bodytext] => Quite and serene,alone in my dream

jut a gentle darkness enveloping

a bright blue sky pulsing with dread

the turbid clouds their colour losing



Not a birdsong to liven the evening

just a stillness gathering the gloom

all life has fled this pervasivenes

the silence of death,deep brooding



Waiting to meet the last breadth of life

hoping to see me gently float away

the shadow of a life past living

what does it matter a new day



Living to meet ones creator

every breadth a useless gasp

why is death now in hiding

when the senses have lost life's clasp



What is life so light so fleeting

when eternity stares into ones mind

whither the loud voices screeching

what use the egos victory cry



Both the past and present

are but one and the same

a continuim of joy or sorrow

is this life worth living again.



years of past neglectfull living

have only been moments of doom

even death hides in fear and trembling

rotting souls litter the room.


Goaboy
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The Living End

Contributed by Goaboy on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Quite and serene,alone in my dream

jut a gentle darkness enveloping

a bright blue sky pulsing with dread

the turbid clouds their colour losing



Not a birdsong to liven the evening

just a stillness gathering the gloom

all life has fled this pervasivenes

the silence of death,deep brooding



Waiting to meet the last breadth of life

hoping to see me gently float away

the shadow of a life past living

what does it matter a new day



Living to meet ones creator

every breadth a useless gasp

why is death now in hiding

when the senses have lost life's clasp



What is life so light so fleeting

when eternity stares into ones mind

whither the loud voices screeching

what use the egos victory cry



Both the past and present

are but one and the same

a continuim of joy or sorrow

is this life worth living again.



years of past neglectfull living

have only been moments of doom

even death hides in fear and trembling

rotting souls litter the room.


Goaboy




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Re: The Living End (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:27:06 PM AEST
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Well written but so sad.
Thanks for sharing this write.

Hugs to you
Michelle


Re: The Living End (User Rating: 1 )
by bcollard24 on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 09:23:19 AM AEST
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I agree with the above (or below I am not sure how the comments run.) that it is a very sad poem, but I enjoyed how well you conveyed your feelings within such a short space. You made it feel as if you had lost it all, but somewhat regained it for a brief moment.




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