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[aid] => mick
[title] => SECRETS OF THE HEART
[time] => 2009-09-15 19:04:13
[hometext] => Please critique and rate my poem..........even negative feedback is better than no feedback at all.
[bodytext] => I wish that i could tell you of all the things i feel, all the feelings trapped inside my heart cannot reveal. It's not enough to tell you that you're always on my mind, you need to know you're everything i've tried so hard to find. You're the ray of sunshine on my bleak and dismal day, and thoughts of you help to keep my lonliness at bay. You're the friend who's always there the one who makes me smile, your charm can melt the coldest heart your witching eyes beguile. You're the one i'd love to love the one whom i desire, the one who makes my heartbeat race and sets my heart on fire. You're the first thing that i think of each morning when i wake, and with each and every breath i breathe with thoughts of you i ache. You're the one with whom i'd spend my each and every day, loving you so tenderly in every single way. You're everything that i could love if given half a chance, and i would spend my life with you each day filled with romance. Yes, i wish that i could tell you but where, and how to start, just how does one begin to share the secrets of their heart. John Kent. 14/2/2003 © [comments] => 4 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TsunamiWaverider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 143 [ratings] => 30 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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