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HATE HERO
Contributed by
hetlerkh
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 05:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my name is khalil
this is my life story
i will tell u hw i live n i'll tell hw i feel
they say am sweet n cute
bt i dnt knw if its for real
am chained with confussion
with my emotions i dnt knw hw to deal
am always confused and lost
am like a car with no drivin wheel
am an ambitious guy
but from my will ....life keeps to take n steal
my heart tuned to steel
am a magnet of misery
if my memories i reveal
u will panic faint and to life lose appeal
am not over expressing
dieng for me is ideal
hate inside of me i try to conceal
hate to life
hate to my self
hate to my dad
hate to my family
hate to my luck ..and to my god .
am full of hate ....
in hate i got a high rate
i cant find my soul mate
maybe god ...didnt that gurl create
am afraid to go to a date
cuz the gurl am afraid to hurt
cuz inside am full of hate
u keep tellin me to be patiant
bt i cant anymore wait
i dnt have fate
am fatless
aint a life this
am lifeless
i dnt knw wht the ***** a real life is
dnt tell me this is a god quiz
am sick of this life's mess stress supress n distress
hell is my address
when i was born i was cursed .
i didnt have a bless
yes !
that am a loser
n am a freak i confess
i dnt hw to my feelins more express
when i start to talk i digress
now back to the begining
i hate .
am irate
hell is my estate
to mend my heart its late
i tried to kill the pain ...bt it only brought more
Copyright ©
hetlerkh
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2009-09-12 05:25:40]
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Re: HATE HERO
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by elle on
Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 05:47:46 AM AEST
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Hi Khalil. An intimate look into the you of you. Nice piece of writing.
At first glance your story seems desperate. Then I realize that hate is only the other side of love. . . so strong an emotion & attachment that I can only imagine a tremendously close tie to anything or anyone we would hate. It is said that we all function from a place of love or a place of fear. I choose love & ask you what would love do now? |
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