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Rather an icy dead love swoon

Warmth of fires stoked not of want
Tribute to Perdition a strained détente

None for wanting a soulless clutch last
Gorging ourselves on brazen fast

Toiling to remit a painful assess
Always in search of a path to redress

But as Hell’s warmth will draw me away
I’ll hope that she will forgive me one day
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Remit

Contributed by navydocny on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 09:48:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I await welcoming warmth of Hell
Rather an icy dead love swoon

Warmth of fires stoked not of want
Tribute to Perdition a strained détente

None for wanting a soulless clutch last
Gorging ourselves on brazen fast

Toiling to remit a painful assess
Always in search of a path to redress

But as Hell’s warmth will draw me away
I’ll hope that she will forgive me one day

Copyright Â© navydocny ... [ 2009-09-01 09:48:45]
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Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:03:24 AM AEST
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Hi there,

I had 13 years in the Royal Navy. Can relate to
the subject content of your poem. Didn't have
the answer then, and alas, don't have the answer
now. Hang in there, pal. You're in an awful place.
(not that you need to be told that).

Tommy

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:24:15 AM AEST
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Steve, it's so good to see you are still posting, though I see not a lot has changed.
I'm so sorry for all you must endure, especially given the circumstance of where
you are. I know you have been hoping and praying for a long time now. I wish it
were easier for you. This piece is painful, but creatively and beautifully written.
I hope it is somewhat therapeutic for you at least.

Be well and take care, my friend.

~ Breezy

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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so very sad, it drips of loneliness, surely there is something of beauty where you are, something to warm your soul... may you always have a poem in your heart, and pen near your hand, your talent shines,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 12:16:05 PM AEST
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A sad poem on two fronts. However, negativity is the deadliest enemy of all. Remain positive and you can make all these sad poems happy.

-Phil

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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Honoring valor & love in the same stroke of pen. Masterful! ~smiles~ elle

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 08:39:50 PM AEST
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Steve,
this is so sad, a battle on two fronts per say.
I am so sorry that things haven't improved for you. Hang in there ya just never know.......

Hugs you tight
please be safe

Michelle

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by Xjordanary on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 12:47:45 AM AEST
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This is a very emotional and deep write. It saddens me but to the fantastic
use of words i say bravo, and would gladly read on.

Re: Remit (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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Dearest, Steve...

You face this so bravely, my friend. Would that
we could ease the suffering. Just know, that
we suffer with you. Another fantastic piece.

Be well,
~dawn

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