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Have you ever felt a knife pierce against your jugular vein?
The rush of blood becomes so clear to the ear.
The anticipation of pain so obvious.
Have you ever stared into the eyes of your possible murderer?
Black his was.
Dead and lifeless.
Fear rush through your brain.
Am I going to die today?
A knife piercing against my jugular vein.........
All just cause he wanted my cellphone
Which I gave as well as my purse.
My life would have been lost for material things.
What if that knife pierced through my skin?........
A question today I would not be able to answer.
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My jugular vein

Contributed by LadyRose on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:51:02 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

MY JUGULAR VEIN

Have you ever felt a knife pierce against your jugular vein?
The rush of blood becomes so clear to the ear.
The anticipation of pain so obvious.
Have you ever stared into the eyes of your possible murderer?
Black his was.
Dead and lifeless.
Fear rush through your brain.
Am I going to die today?
A knife piercing against my jugular vein.........
All just cause he wanted my cellphone
Which I gave as well as my purse.
My life would have been lost for material things.
What if that knife pierced through my skin?........
A question today I would not be able to answer.

Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-08-30 07:51:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My jugular vein (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 08:24:18 AM AEST
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petty is the mindset that takes. . . glad you're still with us. elle :)

Re: My jugular vein (User Rating: 1 )
by smudger687 on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:27:15 PM AEST
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You can always make more money, buy more things, take more pictures of your kids. It's a shame that this coward has had such a profound effect on your life.

Re: My jugular vein (User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 06:18:57 PM AEST
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I have never been placed in such a terrible mess.

But your words have taken me.

Only with the proper placement of words
can this be accomplished.

(a stunning write !)

peace&love.
Dirk.

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