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Beneath my breast a heartbeat skips
As I look beyond and sigh...

Beyond the timeless beauty of a deep blue velvet night
Farther than eternity,where always there is light
Miles in the distance,beneath moonbeams and stars
The deserts sands are whispering,shimmering afar

I crave within the cool eve wind,dressed only in a song
A thought plays upon my lips,and moves my tears along
I think about your smile and the way it touches mine
As you tempt me from so far beyond,desert sands of time

Warming to the flesh,one mere taste of yesterday
Fantasies caressed,in our eclipse of night and day
Stolen moments but a few,I make the most of stars
As I listen for the whispers,from desert sands afar

Eyes are of the soul,one heart can beat for two
Beneath my breast a smile is born
Each breath I take is you [comments] => 8 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ChenoaShiningwater [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Whispering Sands

Contributed by ChenoaShiningwater on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 07:32:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Reflections of my tears,as though a starlit sky
Beneath my breast a heartbeat skips
As I look beyond and sigh...

Beyond the timeless beauty of a deep blue velvet night
Farther than eternity,where always there is light
Miles in the distance,beneath moonbeams and stars
The deserts sands are whispering,shimmering afar

I crave within the cool eve wind,dressed only in a song
A thought plays upon my lips,and moves my tears along
I think about your smile and the way it touches mine
As you tempt me from so far beyond,desert sands of time

Warming to the flesh,one mere taste of yesterday
Fantasies caressed,in our eclipse of night and day
Stolen moments but a few,I make the most of stars
As I listen for the whispers,from desert sands afar

Eyes are of the soul,one heart can beat for two
Beneath my breast a smile is born
Each breath I take is you

Copyright © ChenoaShiningwater ... [ 2009-08-24 07:32:03]
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Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 08:18:14 AM AEST
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Hi again,

You have a terrific talent. You make each word
fit snugly in place, and as it does so, it sings
its note, whilst completing the whole.

'I crave within the cool eve wind, dressed only in
a song.'

Poetry, music, perfection!

Don't run out of ink!

Tommy

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 11:05:05 AM AEST
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Not only touches the heart, but feels it as

well.excuse me while i catch my breath, i

couldn't help but lose it momentarily,

reading your divine writing . . .

Ben

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 12:47:46 PM AEST
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'Tis breath-taking & the wind song soothes & lulls my senses as well. A beautiful piece! elle :)

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 01:41:00 PM AEST
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excellent poem, i can relate to this. i have enjoyed reading this poem. keep up the good work.

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 03:39:59 PM AEST
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Wow, CSW...It's great to have your words gracing the halls of YPDC once again... Beautifully written...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 04:56:35 PM AEST
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so lovely and peaceful, beautifully written,

hugs n' love nessa
w/b

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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wow...just wow
good write

Re: Whispering Sands (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:46:54 AM AEST
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Goodness...this is just such an epic
write. I have a fondness for this kind of
meter, and even this vein of prose, but I must
say, this took my breath away. I can close
my eyes even now, and see the vast desert
sky. Fantastic piece, just a joy to read and
experience. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Be well,
Loende

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