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Array ( [sid] => 152485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind These Walls [time] => 2009-08-23 01:37:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I sit on this throne
I can hear the distant war.
People calling my name
As I shut the door.

Behind these walls words cannot hurt me.

I order the gates locked
To bar people from entering.
They won't set foot on my land again
They bring only suffering.

Behind these walls I am pain free.

I tend to my wounds
With rage in my eyes.
I wish upon my attackers
A timely demise.

Behind these walls healing can start.

My enemy could not break through my defences
So no marks on my chest you will find.
It was the people I called my friends
Who struck me from behind.

Behind these walls I guard my heart.

I dismiss my advisors
Who attempt to lead me outside.
I now trust no one
So no longer are they needed at my side.

Behind these walls I'm on my own.

Though lonely I am
In these empty halls.
No one can hurt me
Behind these walls.

Behind these walls I stand alone.

I find myself limping
Towards the closed gate.
Once again heading towards
The world is so hate.

Behind these walls I cannot stay.

I know I get hurt
Every time I leave my sanctuary.
I forgive and forget
And all my past hate I bury.

Behind these walls I won't waste another day.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 65 [informant] => Deon_Claassen [notes] => Edited per request in Poem Edit and Deletion Requests Moderator_18 September 3, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Behind These Walls

Contributed by Deon_Claassen on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 01:37:46 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



As I sit on this throne
I can hear the distant war.
People calling my name
As I shut the door.

Behind these walls words cannot hurt me.

I order the gates locked
To bar people from entering.
They won't set foot on my land again
They bring only suffering.

Behind these walls I am pain free.

I tend to my wounds
With rage in my eyes.
I wish upon my attackers
A timely demise.

Behind these walls healing can start.

My enemy could not break through my defences
So no marks on my chest you will find.
It was the people I called my friends
Who struck me from behind.

Behind these walls I guard my heart.

I dismiss my advisors
Who attempt to lead me outside.
I now trust no one
So no longer are they needed at my side.

Behind these walls I'm on my own.

Though lonely I am
In these empty halls.
No one can hurt me
Behind these walls.

Behind these walls I stand alone.

I find myself limping
Towards the closed gate.
Once again heading towards
The world is so hate.

Behind these walls I cannot stay.

I know I get hurt
Every time I leave my sanctuary.
I forgive and forget
And all my past hate I bury.

Behind these walls I won't waste another day.




Copyright © Deon_Claassen ... [ 2009-08-23 01:37:46]
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Re: Behind These Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by batmankiller on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 09:31:00 PM AEST
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really nice read. One of the few that are actually god when they exceed a certain length. I like the format.


Re: Behind These Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 08:15:35 AM AEST
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Very good. It stayed on subject, it kept a whole thought throughout, it was really good. I loved the concept of it, it painted a vivid picture. Well done.
David




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