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Array ( [sid] => 152461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remotes are Failing [time] => 2009-08-22 07:32:00 [hometext] => Taken from my new book of short stories called Capias. Blog: http://capiandreams.blogspot.com/ [bodytext] => Weightless wanting less
Weighing up options upon return
Next turn boosters at rest
Hawk eye distance over speed
Space is all I need
Give me space and I am freed
Away from heartache and greed
Just me
Just distance over speed
Surrounded by silence swing the sirens round
Radars remit sound,
requests of return from a Gods eye view
Heavenly ghosts have chosen you
I have chosen distance
Distain for those who remain
Nothing to loss all to gain
From weightless smooth sailing
While your remotes are failing
Worthless wonderings watching your world
Wonder where we went wrong
Wether wrong turns were your sin
It’s hard to change course once you begin
From a distance I see all
From idols tall to your faith so small
I see all but you don’t see me
You don’t see my face
Through the speed and distance of space.

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Capian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Remotes are Failing

Contributed by Capian on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 07:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Weightless wanting less
Weighing up options upon return
Next turn boosters at rest
Hawk eye distance over speed
Space is all I need
Give me space and I am freed
Away from heartache and greed
Just me
Just distance over speed
Surrounded by silence swing the sirens round
Radars remit sound,
requests of return from a Gods eye view
Heavenly ghosts have chosen you
I have chosen distance
Distain for those who remain
Nothing to loss all to gain
From weightless smooth sailing
While your remotes are failing
Worthless wonderings watching your world
Wonder where we went wrong
Wether wrong turns were your sin
It’s hard to change course once you begin
From a distance I see all
From idols tall to your faith so small
I see all but you don’t see me
You don’t see my face
Through the speed and distance of space.

Copyright Â© Capian ... [ 2009-08-22 07:32:00]
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Re: Remotes are Failing (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 06:21:36 AM AEST
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Great piece. . .
I love the beginning, (but the entire write, really) such depth.

"Weightless wanting less"

Intense! Welcome. . . elle :)

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