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You can make me smile,
Just by being you.
I know it sounds cheesy..
But it's true.

Do you want to know a secret?
I wish I could be with you.
Except you already knew that,
Didn't you?
...Of course you did

Do you want to know a secret?
Sometimes I don't know what to say.
Always scared.
You'll runaway,
It's happened before...

Do you want to know a secret?
I'm terrified to fall in love.
To even let myself begin to fall,
Because once I do..
You might be gone.

Do you want to know a secret?
I still have things I haven't told you,
But I want to..
I want you to know..
Everything about me.

Do you want to know a secret?
I worry that I think of us as more than what we are..
Which makes me wonder..
How far can this really go?
Before something goes wrong

Do you want to know a secret?
I told you this would have a happy ending..
Well..
I'm pretty sure.
......
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Do You Want To Know A Secret?

Contributed by Roxximajor on Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 08:54:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Do you want to know a secret?
You can make me smile,
Just by being you.
I know it sounds cheesy..
But it's true.

Do you want to know a secret?
I wish I could be with you.
Except you already knew that,
Didn't you?
...Of course you did

Do you want to know a secret?
Sometimes I don't know what to say.
Always scared.
You'll runaway,
It's happened before...

Do you want to know a secret?
I'm terrified to fall in love.
To even let myself begin to fall,
Because once I do..
You might be gone.

Do you want to know a secret?
I still have things I haven't told you,
But I want to..
I want you to know..
Everything about me.

Do you want to know a secret?
I worry that I think of us as more than what we are..
Which makes me wonder..
How far can this really go?
Before something goes wrong

Do you want to know a secret?
I told you this would have a happy ending..
Well..
I'm pretty sure.
......
I lied...

Copyright © Roxximajor ... [ 2009-08-19 08:54:09]
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Re: Do You Want To Know A Secret? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ashley_Linea on Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 10:25:35 AM AEST
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Amazing.
I really relate to this.
But I'm confused about the ending.
How did you lie about it having a happy ending?
Did you already know that he would eventually end it?

Re: Do You Want To Know A Secret? (User Rating: 1 )
by Nico on Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 02:33:42 PM AEST
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I love this well done!
Im confused as well about the end
But oh well, it was really good :)

Re: Do You Want To Know A Secret? (User Rating: 1 )
by Roxximajor on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 09:27:49 AM AEST
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Sorry if the end doesn't really make sense but. I wrote this for a guy and most of my poetry is usually really sad. So I told him this one would have a happy ending. So..I lied...

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