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Array ( [sid] => 152268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give me a chance [time] => 2009-08-15 13:08:29 [hometext] => .........he will never be you....... [bodytext] => GIVE ME A CHANCE

He did me wrong.
and I remind you of that.
I am insecure
and security is something I must gain.
Your not him
still I hold you accountable
just cause you are a man.
I realise I am wrong
to see him in your face.
Thats what life did to me
I apologise.
Give me a chance to find me again.
Dont go to far away
I want to love you still. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LadyRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Give me a chance

Contributed by LadyRose on Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 01:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

GIVE ME A CHANCE

He did me wrong.
and I remind you of that.
I am insecure
and security is something I must gain.
Your not him
still I hold you accountable
just cause you are a man.
I realise I am wrong
to see him in your face.
Thats what life did to me
I apologise.
Give me a chance to find me again.
Dont go to far away
I want to love you still.

Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-08-15 13:08:29]
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Re: Give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 02:35:48 PM AEST
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And you will never be him? No one is exactly alike. :-)

I love the fact that the person in this poem (you?) realizes that we should not hold the next "prospect" accountable for anything the other did in a prior relationship. I suppose they call that part of the rebound? I don't know but I do know that I love the subject in this and that there is the realization no blame (if any) needs to be pointed at the next person.

Thank you for a nice read.

Take care,

Tim
(who can so relate to this)

Re: Give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 06:01:04 AM AEST
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everyone needs the chance to find ones self, and if they understand they will wait for you no matter what,this is love,,
a friend in words,,spooky

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