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Array ( [sid] => 152255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once In A Place of Dreams [time] => 2009-08-14 23:32:59 [hometext] => This poem is about a person realizing that the earth as we speak is loosing love. However, if we all has humans and souls of the world unite we will have a shot at restoring this beautiful Universe with the love and peace it was destined to have. [bodytext] => There was once a time
Where there were timeless hours
Hourly nights
Nights of z's
Of a peaceful land

There once was a place
A place full of color
Colorful life
Life's araise
Of a peaceful land

Now there's a time
With a clock always ticking
A day always flaming
A flame always fading
Fading into a pit
Of a pitiful land

Now there's a place
A place full of war
Surrounded by struggles
A battle of tears
Tears that shatter
Of a pitiful land

I had a dream
Of a dreamful place
A night of Z's
Where night has no worries
Worries don't exist
Existings are peacful
Once in a place of dreams

Here, the dream now
revolves in the settled night sky
Where a single moon shines
Shines for hope and wisdom
Everyone can see this wisdom
Once in a place of dreams

Dreams turn into nightmares
Fear runs through your body
Static is now your blood
Electric that up turns you
You now have no more drives
You drive no story
Stories don't exist
Once in a place of 'mares

I had a nightmare
My eyes are open
Open, I am awake
I can here the sirens
I see the battle
Battles at my street corner
Corners that are black
Where is that wisdom I dreamt?

My dream was the allusion
There was never a place of color
There was never a simple moon
Never a night of Z's
Once in a place of allusions

What I dreamt was unreal
Blackness is among us
Struggles are accentuated
Life here feels like a dying rose
A fading flame
In this pitiful land

I will live with the allusion
In this pitiful land
One in a place of dreams

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Once In A Place of Dreams

Contributed by nadia on Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 11:32:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

There was once a time
Where there were timeless hours
Hourly nights
Nights of z's
Of a peaceful land

There once was a place
A place full of color
Colorful life
Life's araise
Of a peaceful land

Now there's a time
With a clock always ticking
A day always flaming
A flame always fading
Fading into a pit
Of a pitiful land

Now there's a place
A place full of war
Surrounded by struggles
A battle of tears
Tears that shatter
Of a pitiful land

I had a dream
Of a dreamful place
A night of Z's
Where night has no worries
Worries don't exist
Existings are peacful
Once in a place of dreams

Here, the dream now
revolves in the settled night sky
Where a single moon shines
Shines for hope and wisdom
Everyone can see this wisdom
Once in a place of dreams

Dreams turn into nightmares
Fear runs through your body
Static is now your blood
Electric that up turns you
You now have no more drives
You drive no story
Stories don't exist
Once in a place of 'mares

I had a nightmare
My eyes are open
Open, I am awake
I can here the sirens
I see the battle
Battles at my street corner
Corners that are black
Where is that wisdom I dreamt?

My dream was the allusion
There was never a place of color
There was never a simple moon
Never a night of Z's
Once in a place of allusions

What I dreamt was unreal
Blackness is among us
Struggles are accentuated
Life here feels like a dying rose
A fading flame
In this pitiful land

I will live with the allusion
In this pitiful land
One in a place of dreams

Copyright © nadia ... [ 2009-08-14 23:32:59]
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Re: Once In A Place of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by orphani on Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 01:14:50 AM AEST
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to hold such dreams is to see the futility of darkness--- like an animal that feeds on its self it can not endure.
find love and you find peace.
o

Re: Once In A Place of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 10:09:56 PM AEST
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There is nothing more sorrowful than a time of happiness recalled in a time of misery.

Time.... ah time....

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