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I’m sorry I feel how I feel
I know this is not what you wanted
From this pain my heart cannot heal

For now all I want is to hold you
Protect you from all that may come
T’was you that started this heart beating
A heart I thought forever grown numb

My darkness was lit by your laughter
Your voice a song I did crave
Your eyes filled my soul with such wonder
This magic I take to my grave

For your heart belongs to another
To the fates I beg and plead why
But I know deep inside I’m not worthy
And for this I choose to die

Goodbye
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Goodbye

Contributed by mrpeanut64 on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 09:26:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I’m sorry I am who I am
I’m sorry I feel how I feel
I know this is not what you wanted
From this pain my heart cannot heal

For now all I want is to hold you
Protect you from all that may come
T’was you that started this heart beating
A heart I thought forever grown numb

My darkness was lit by your laughter
Your voice a song I did crave
Your eyes filled my soul with such wonder
This magic I take to my grave

For your heart belongs to another
To the fates I beg and plead why
But I know deep inside I’m not worthy
And for this I choose to die

Goodbye

Copyright Â© mrpeanut64 ... [ 2009-08-11 21:26:38]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by orphani on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 09:35:58 PM AEST
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loved the lyrical quality and deapth of sentiment.

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 10:02:32 PM AEST
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Very touching write.
Hope this is just good writing.
Huggs, blessings, hope,
emy

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymous1212 on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 10:49:41 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and touching, i pray that writing this has helped you and you do not chose to say goodbye to everything.

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 12:37:01 AM AEST
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such a cherishing poem all the way up until the last stanza...that's love sometimes, up and then way down all of a sudden. many can relate to this, i know i do. take care

-K.Z.

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 02:58:07 PM AEST
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beautifully sad..

hugs n' love nessa

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