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Bellowing flame from its lifeless body consuming itself in fire,
Burning away all the pain it was so blessed with in life,
Falling free from its captive in death,
A foe struck the final blow,
Freeing a friend from the hate within,
The quest is at its end,
The strive for death,
Now the gift of life. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unholy_soldier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Falling Free

Contributed by unholy_soldier on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Falling from the sky like a dragon without life,
Bellowing flame from its lifeless body consuming itself in fire,
Burning away all the pain it was so blessed with in life,
Falling free from its captive in death,
A foe struck the final blow,
Freeing a friend from the hate within,
The quest is at its end,
The strive for death,
Now the gift of life.

Copyright © unholy_soldier ... [ 2003-03-30 07:35:00]
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Re: Falling Free (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:12:13 AM AEST
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i love your imagery of the dragon, particularly the line: Bellowing flame from its lifeless body consuming itself in fire.
Beautiful.
x_x_x

Re: Falling Free (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:28:10 AM AEST
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powerful, visual imagery and effective juxtaposition - your message is clear within these emotive words. great write, i enjoyed the rest of your work, Kate x

Re: Falling Free (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:34:27 PM AEST
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i read the poem without reading the note, then i read the note and it all made sense, its an amazing poem, the imagery and the ideas in it are just wonderful, oh yeah and the imagination is outstanding

Re: Falling Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:09:35 PM AEST
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excellent write...good imagery

Sharon

Re: Falling Free (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:40:03 AM AEST
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But the only real way to be free is to be dead

S.S. is J.F.

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