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[sid] => 151995
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Rescue Me
[time] => 2009-08-04 06:49:14
[hometext] => A quick one before work...
[bodytext] => This story is about, a teenage girl who Befriended a cloud that was dark and grey Not a very nice cloud... that, deep down, she knew Before I start the story I should say It is a hundred percent true... I once had a cloud above my head It wasn't an ordinary cloud but neither was it orange, or gold, or red It was dark, almost black, it was grey It didn't feel like a nice cloud But I couldn't pull away from its grip No body could hear me, no matter how loud I shouted for them to help me I just let the cloud follow me Control me, Befriend me Then one day its all i could see And the only thing i knew Until one day i saw the sun For the first time in a long time The clouds advice was to run, Just run But I didn't run, I stayed, I was brave The sun would then chip away everyday, more and more at the dark cloud that so wanted to stay Then, one day, the cloud, My friend Was gone I knew he was still there Just faded into the back ground The sun had hid him somewhere But he'll me find me, again, If he really wants to Then the story goes on And the sun is my friend now All the bad thoughts are gone Replaced with positivity This carried on for a while Until now, The sun, chased away By an old friend. And with a radius of a mile The cloud is back, Above my head, Bigger Better More powerful To put an end to this story I'll just say, that now I'm sure The cloud's not a friend, more an enemy And I'll wait, once more For you, the sun To rescue Me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MissAnnonymous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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