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Array ( [sid] => 151397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => OH! WHAT A SILENT NIGHT [time] => 2009-07-10 02:22:58 [hometext] => Conspiracy of silence. Dark night. Tears rolling down on cheeks. What a bitter silent night?! [bodytext] => Sometimes in the winter,
Somewhere where I sat,
In the dark silent sorrowful night,
Tears rolled down dropping,
Helpless, hopeless and discouraged.

Somewhere in the winter,
In the cold lonely weather,
Future seems very badly blinking,
Failure seems everywhere,
Nobody understands the helpless.

Sometimes in the winter,
In the hopelessness of the night,
Without one near to say sorry,
No one seems to be concerned,
I wept out all my strength.

Somewhere in the winter,
When delusion overwhelm the heart,
Lifting up the eyes to see,
Thinking deep to know,
If the future holds something sweet.

Yet in this winter,
The love mixed with hatred,
Succour far in distance waving bye,
Hope dancing melting away as candle,
Left alone to face with fate.

Somewhere in the winter,
Where home seems to be hopeless,
When schooling seems to be chase of wind,
Friends seems to be unfriendly,
Careful thought of loneliness covers everywhere.

Somewhere in the winter,
Look up into the sky,
Wanting to see if one is there watching,
Likewise in the stars, moon and heavenlies,
If one is seeing and could understand.

Then in the winter,
As if He has been waiting for me,
Waiting for out-pouring of a heavy heart,
Stretching hands, smiling softly
Here I am, here to change.

In this same winter-time,
I see power in my courage,
I knew sometime, somehow,
Somewhere, lies the hope for the hopeless,
And fulfillment to the helpless.

Then sometime in the winter,
I got and read it somewhere,
Put it in my spirit and thinking,
“Time makes me master of my own destiny,
Supremacy over my own goodwill”.

Yes, in the same winter,
I hope even in the hopelessness,
Faith-out the helpless situation,
That I am a bomb of miracle,
Going somewhere to explode.
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OH! WHAT A SILENT NIGHT

Contributed by solaseun on Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 02:22:58 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sometimes in the winter,
Somewhere where I sat,
In the dark silent sorrowful night,
Tears rolled down dropping,
Helpless, hopeless and discouraged.

Somewhere in the winter,
In the cold lonely weather,
Future seems very badly blinking,
Failure seems everywhere,
Nobody understands the helpless.

Sometimes in the winter,
In the hopelessness of the night,
Without one near to say sorry,
No one seems to be concerned,
I wept out all my strength.

Somewhere in the winter,
When delusion overwhelm the heart,
Lifting up the eyes to see,
Thinking deep to know,
If the future holds something sweet.

Yet in this winter,
The love mixed with hatred,
Succour far in distance waving bye,
Hope dancing melting away as candle,
Left alone to face with fate.

Somewhere in the winter,
Where home seems to be hopeless,
When schooling seems to be chase of wind,
Friends seems to be unfriendly,
Careful thought of loneliness covers everywhere.

Somewhere in the winter,
Look up into the sky,
Wanting to see if one is there watching,
Likewise in the stars, moon and heavenlies,
If one is seeing and could understand.

Then in the winter,
As if He has been waiting for me,
Waiting for out-pouring of a heavy heart,
Stretching hands, smiling softly
Here I am, here to change.

In this same winter-time,
I see power in my courage,
I knew sometime, somehow,
Somewhere, lies the hope for the hopeless,
And fulfillment to the helpless.

Then sometime in the winter,
I got and read it somewhere,
Put it in my spirit and thinking,
“Time makes me master of my own destiny,
Supremacy over my own goodwill”.

Yes, in the same winter,
I hope even in the hopelessness,
Faith-out the helpless situation,
That I am a bomb of miracle,
Going somewhere to explode.

Copyright Â© solaseun ... [ 2009-07-10 02:22:58]
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Re: OH! WHAT A SILENT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 12:35:27 AM AEST
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Oh my heck! This is truly a master of a write.
I felt this deep inside, it brought tears to my eyes. Nice work here and so postive in the end! You took me through many emotion from start to finish.

Michelle

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