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he was slowly creeping closer
but what was about to happen was unreal
it snuck up on him as if it wasnt even really there
worse and worse the pain got
but who knew where it was coming from
perhaps an invisible force
maybe not
maybe it was a complex thing called life
living through being taunted
being bullied and picked on
always the smallest
very talkative
always energetic
but the pain grew worse and worse
everyone who made fun of him would pay
he rewed that he would get them someday somehow
the day finally came
he was pushed to the edge
he came and left as a breeze on an autumn day
just like that people stand mourning around his cascet
his friends
his family
his calssmates
his enemies
and he vowes that they will pay
they will pay [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 21 [informant] => bucksportwaldo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Payback

Contributed by bucksportwaldo on Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 12:21:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

he was laying as low as he could
he was slowly creeping closer
but what was about to happen was unreal
it snuck up on him as if it wasnt even really there
worse and worse the pain got
but who knew where it was coming from
perhaps an invisible force
maybe not
maybe it was a complex thing called life
living through being taunted
being bullied and picked on
always the smallest
very talkative
always energetic
but the pain grew worse and worse
everyone who made fun of him would pay
he rewed that he would get them someday somehow
the day finally came
he was pushed to the edge
he came and left as a breeze on an autumn day
just like that people stand mourning around his cascet
his friends
his family
his calssmates
his enemies
and he vowes that they will pay
they will pay

Copyright © bucksportwaldo ... [ 2009-07-05 00:21:04]
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Re: Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 07:12:52 AM AEST
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Definately feel the emotion in this one. Hopefully things get better. ^_^

Re: Payback (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 5th July 2009 @ 05:38:03 PM AEST
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Your poem exudes pain. I can relate to this so much. I have been bullied my entire life. I
even cut classes because the bullying was so bad. Please make sure you make people you trust aware of this. It should be stopped. I hate bullies!. You deserve to be treated with kindness as does any human being. If I can help in any way please let me know and never give up like it sounds like you are thinking about doing in your poem!
Sorry I rambled, I just relate to this topic so much! Great poem.

Heidi

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