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Array ( [sid] => 150773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Hold My Strings So Coldly [time] => 2009-06-16 14:44:23 [hometext] => (Sometimes love controls you, sometimes it hurts you, too) [bodytext] => Lately I feel sick and hollow
my mind on fire, my heart bleeding out
I walk blindly, lacking an incentive to follow
bathed in moonlight, comprised of doubt
You treat me like a rag doll
your voice so cold and cruel
Do you love me at all?
Or am I just a fool?
I sit here and smoke in silence
you and I, we're miles apart
but the distance doesn't break the violence
your words invite inside my heart
my windowless eyes are dreaming a disaster
because I am the puppet and you are the master. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 65 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

You Hold My Strings So Coldly

Contributed by Inevitable on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Lately I feel sick and hollow
my mind on fire, my heart bleeding out
I walk blindly, lacking an incentive to follow
bathed in moonlight, comprised of doubt
You treat me like a rag doll
your voice so cold and cruel
Do you love me at all?
Or am I just a fool?
I sit here and smoke in silence
you and I, we're miles apart
but the distance doesn't break the violence
your words invite inside my heart
my windowless eyes are dreaming a disaster
because I am the puppet and you are the master.

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2009-06-16 14:44:23]
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Re: You Hold My Strings So Coldly (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:34:54 PM AEST
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it flowed very impressively, well put together, good job.

-Phil

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