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Array ( [sid] => 150579 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shadow Dance [time] => 2009-06-09 09:09:56 [hometext] => This is for my 32 year old brother that passed on. I will never be alone, as long as I can remember [bodytext] => Closing my eyes one body it sways
Feeling your essence drawing near
The melody moves me no delay
Grabbing hands my senses are clear

I see us as children carefree and bold
Our whole life ahead no fears do we feel
No thought of the future what it may hold
Living the moment our fates do we seal

Our music sounds older stronger is our part
Drifting on melodies further away
The love that I feel is a dart in my heart
Expressions of feelings are harder to say

Soon it is too late the chance is no more
The music it slows to a soft mild hum
Brother you're gone from the physical door
My tearful eyes open the music is done.

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Shadow Dance

Contributed by sarablu722 on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:09:56 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Closing my eyes one body it sways
Feeling your essence drawing near
The melody moves me no delay
Grabbing hands my senses are clear

I see us as children carefree and bold
Our whole life ahead no fears do we feel
No thought of the future what it may hold
Living the moment our fates do we seal

Our music sounds older stronger is our part
Drifting on melodies further away
The love that I feel is a dart in my heart
Expressions of feelings are harder to say

Soon it is too late the chance is no more
The music it slows to a soft mild hum
Brother you're gone from the physical door
My tearful eyes open the music is done.

Copyright © sarablu722 ... [ 2009-06-09 09:09:56]
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Re: Shadow Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:17:55 AM AEST
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A lovely tribute to your brother.
I am sorry for your loss...
Jenni

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