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Array ( [sid] => 150430 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Juvenile [time] => 2009-06-03 17:13:24 [hometext] => Day to day trial and error [bodytext] => Its so juvenile to think that life holds nothing more than materialistic things, and unrealistic flings.

you are not yet a fully formed being if you don't know what it means to live.love.laugh and forget all those shiny things.

Money cant buy you happiness; and if you think otherwise i suggest you become used to having less.

Most people make all of their decisions based on all the wrong reasons. never do they make all the wrong decisions for all the right reasons. more like making all the right decisions for all the wrong reasons.

sounds so juvenile doesnt it? but its sad to say that''s not the worst of it.

alot of people use the word love and they aren''t sure what the word made of. not knowing what could express it is just a simple hug.

oh yes. The world is very juvenile but if i go any further this could take a while.

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Juvenile

Contributed by NiCkyBABy on Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 05:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Its so juvenile to think that life holds nothing more than materialistic things, and unrealistic flings.

you are not yet a fully formed being if you don't know what it means to live.love.laugh and forget all those shiny things.

Money cant buy you happiness; and if you think otherwise i suggest you become used to having less.

Most people make all of their decisions based on all the wrong reasons. never do they make all the wrong decisions for all the right reasons. more like making all the right decisions for all the wrong reasons.

sounds so juvenile doesnt it? but its sad to say that''s not the worst of it.

alot of people use the word love and they aren''t sure what the word made of. not knowing what could express it is just a simple hug.

oh yes. The world is very juvenile but if i go any further this could take a while.

Copyright © NiCkyBABy ... [ 2009-06-03 17:13:24]
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Re: Juvenile (User Rating: 1 )
by CherylC on Wednesday, 28th January 2015 @ 09:29:33 AM AEST
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What do I say that won't sound "juvenile"? I am not sure how I really feel about this poem, or maybe it is the title you have chosen. "Most people....less" is the line that kind of stands out to me, since I really don't agree that most people make the decisions based on the wrong reasons. Yes, some do, but, I do not agree that it is most who do. Just my opinion, though.

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