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living with myself
Contributed by
davidcircle
on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 01:28:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I,We
Terrified of the imminent collapse
Yet oblivious to the unpredictable
Tentative to any advance
Yet scathing of any restraint.
Drenched by slow motion apprehensiveness
Yet completely without complaint
Find no reason in these utterances
Yet find smugness at the close of every line
Clamped down by an unsearching finality
Yet still emerging fresh faced every time
Both ends are open
with the tunnel
closed
unlit
blind
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2009-05-29 13:28:30]
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Re: living with myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:34:19 PM AEST
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a high quality, well constructed write. you've got talent.
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Re: living with myself
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 12:43:26 AM AEST
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Excellent write, I love this.
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