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Array ( [sid] => 15025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fall from Glory [time] => 2003-03-27 17:45:00 [hometext] => This is just something i scribbled down one day. i like it, but u can give me ur opinion if it makes u happy. [bodytext] => Forever more shall darkness rise
And crush the crumbling forlorn cries
And silence all the dying sighs
Of those who came before

All the valiant heroes slain
With their blood the streets are stained
The gastly stench curls up in vain
As seraphs fall to the floor

Orphans wander through the street
Looking for love they'll never meet
As death takes its almighty seat
The throne which it hath tore

Purity now succumbs to sin
Evil finally destined to win
Death himself sports a groteque grin
That tells of unspeakable gore [comments] => 6 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kels497 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fall from Glory

Contributed by kels497 on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Forever more shall darkness rise
And crush the crumbling forlorn cries
And silence all the dying sighs
Of those who came before

All the valiant heroes slain
With their blood the streets are stained
The gastly stench curls up in vain
As seraphs fall to the floor

Orphans wander through the street
Looking for love they'll never meet
As death takes its almighty seat
The throne which it hath tore

Purity now succumbs to sin
Evil finally destined to win
Death himself sports a groteque grin
That tells of unspeakable gore

Copyright © kels497 ... [ 2003-03-27 17:45:00]
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Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:00:14 PM AEST
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This was good very dark I loved the imagry the last stanza was a bit confusing, but I loved it. Great poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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very good write

Sharon

Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 05:31:22 AM AEST
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Great poem. I like the darker poetry.

sleepless_siren

Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:18:19 PM AEST
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Nice and dark, with an evil twist.
Great read, I love dark poetry.

Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST
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K497
Almost fits the tune "Scotland shall be free" j

Stumbles on the lilt here and there but
I don't suppose you know the tune

Very good uncompromising sentiment. Strong stuff!

On the same theme try my latest "The first and last commandment"

Re: Fall from Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by Niceguysfinishlast on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 12:29:55 AM AEST
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shows a good view of hopelessness

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