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Array ( [sid] => 149587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ [time] => 2009-05-02 11:24:40 [hometext] => Venting...... [bodytext] => ~~xXx~~

There’s a thin line between love and hate
And now I’ve crossed that line.
I’ve loved you for thirty-five years
Now I don’t ever want you inside my gate.

I’ve taken all the heartache I can bear,
You’ve caused me too much grief.
You’ve taken me beyond the limit,
Now, for you, I really do not care.

The very sight of you now makes me sick.
I don’t even want to hear your name.
You have hurt me in the worst possible way,
Now I want you out of my life real quick.

You have caused our family so much pain.
You have made us hang our heads in shame.
The time has come to cut you loose,
I am tired of this strife and strain.

You succeeded time and again to make me feel such guilt,
You have said so many hurtful things to me.
You have forced the three people I love the most,
To leave the home that our Dad built.

I want you to know it just wouldn’t work anymore.
For now I’ve crossed the line between love and hate.
No longer will I be a sucker for your lies,
You’re no longer welcome at my door!

~~xXx~~
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~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 11:24:40 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



~~xXx~~

There’s a thin line between love and hate
And now I’ve crossed that line.
I’ve loved you for thirty-five years
Now I don’t ever want you inside my gate.

I’ve taken all the heartache I can bear,
You’ve caused me too much grief.
You’ve taken me beyond the limit,
Now, for you, I really do not care.

The very sight of you now makes me sick.
I don’t even want to hear your name.
You have hurt me in the worst possible way,
Now I want you out of my life real quick.

You have caused our family so much pain.
You have made us hang our heads in shame.
The time has come to cut you loose,
I am tired of this strife and strain.

You succeeded time and again to make me feel such guilt,
You have said so many hurtful things to me.
You have forced the three people I love the most,
To leave the home that our Dad built.

I want you to know it just wouldn’t work anymore.
For now I’ve crossed the line between love and hate.
No longer will I be a sucker for your lies,
You’re no longer welcome at my door!

~~xXx~~




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Re: ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 05:24:40 PM AEST
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very articulate in ur emotions, a shade of sadness/frustration/distress...hang in there, hope all goes well...take care
-K.Z.


Re: ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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Wow I can't recall the last time i read one of your poems so angry. I do hope all is well, I'm just PM away, my thoughts are with you my dear friend.

Very strong write, I felt it.

The Phantom


Re: ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni dear...............I'm so sorry to hear,
Rid yourself of all the grief, sorrow, and rage.
I've walked that road,performed on that stage.
It can be heart breaking for sure.
I'm glad you're not willing to take it anymore.
Well written Jenni as all your poems are, Be happy and peaceful even if alone!.
Warm love
consue


Re: ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 02:33:25 AM AEST
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Oh my sister.. I never could imagine this. your grief and anger with tear filled eyes
I can see you here..my lovely sister..
peace be to you...Be in solitude and be cool..Hugs..:-)venkat


Re: ~A Thin Line Between Love And Hate~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Darin on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 06:11:41 PM AEST
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I'm definitely becoming a fan of your great work. Excellent!




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