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Array ( [sid] => 14943 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Loved ones [time] => 2003-03-26 13:45:00 [hometext] => this is for my children that i wish i had. Babysitting was a great experiance for me. i grew too attached to them. they are gone now, elsewhere. i miss them alot now. [bodytext] => Parental instincts kick everytime they come.
bringing out the best i can give. how i wish i was a father.

years pass and i still love them,
lookin' after them from afar.
I know they love me too.

My passion to love them lives on,
the strength of ther innnocence
gives me courage.

the funny thing is that they are not mine

all i can say is........
I love you Ivan,
I love you Sahvanna.

Behave.
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Loved ones

Contributed by darkkai on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Parental instincts kick everytime they come.
bringing out the best i can give. how i wish i was a father.

years pass and i still love them,
lookin' after them from afar.
I know they love me too.

My passion to love them lives on,
the strength of ther innnocence
gives me courage.

the funny thing is that they are not mine

all i can say is........
I love you Ivan,
I love you Sahvanna.

Behave.

Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2003-03-26 13:45:00]
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Re: Loved ones (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 03:58:38 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this..I can identify with it in a strange way......
Jenni

Re: Loved ones (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:14:46 AM AEST
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Great poem. I remember when I used to live with a friend and she had a little boy. I got so atached to him and when I moved out I missed him loads.

sleepless_siren

Re: Loved ones (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:36:05 PM AEST
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Liked your poem it was very sweet.

Re: Loved ones (User Rating: 1 )
by darkkai on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:48:58 AM AEST
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this poem is connected to A Midnight Vision, I have a thing on protecting children. I still to this day do babysit and watch over most of the kids that live at my apartment complex. Ivan and Sahvanna are my inspiration in writing the poem that u have just read. "The strength of thier innocence give me courage."
this is true when u think hard about the situations and adventures in babysitting. what a fun ride it was, and now too. =o)

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