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Array ( [sid] => 149274 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A FLY BACK [time] => 2009-04-20 22:57:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => They sent birds out
to look for your soul
they came back
with a message in their beck
which said 'I am lost.'

I sent my heart which could fly
and a note which said
'take this and it will guide your way home.'

My heart flew back
saying 'his soul could not
take me
because he said he was unworthy
and my heart wept
and lay down to sleep.

I gave my soul wings;
told it to find his
and a bird came back
saying
'your two souls are together
but it is a long trail back
but they are coming home; '

I wait soulless for now
in this waiting time;
my heart is still asleep
available to no one
my spirit
gentle soars
knowing you
are on the road
coming back home
where all of me
and all of you will
lie down
pulling the covers
over
to dream
as we once did. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

A FLY BACK

Contributed by lnnie on Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 10:57:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

They sent birds out
to look for your soul
they came back
with a message in their beck
which said 'I am lost.'

I sent my heart which could fly
and a note which said
'take this and it will guide your way home.'

My heart flew back
saying 'his soul could not
take me
because he said he was unworthy
and my heart wept
and lay down to sleep.

I gave my soul wings;
told it to find his
and a bird came back
saying
'your two souls are together
but it is a long trail back
but they are coming home; '

I wait soulless for now
in this waiting time;
my heart is still asleep
available to no one
my spirit
gentle soars
knowing you
are on the road
coming back home
where all of me
and all of you will
lie down
pulling the covers
over
to dream
as we once did.

Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2009-04-20 22:57:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A FLY BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 04:23:03 PM AEST
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I liked this, it felt almost like a story passed down through the centuries somehow, it that makes sense............well it does to me !! lol
Nice work

Steve

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