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My head is throbbing, my ears are pounding.
All of a sudden I can hear the silence.
All of a sudden I can see what's invisible.
My nightmares are coming true.
The darkness is spreading to all corners of the room.
What little comfort I have left vanishes
as my last candle flickers and dies.
I'm too afraid to move, too afraid to cry.
All I can feel is the cold.
All I can see is the dark.
It's like a thousand hands are touching me
And I feel like I'm barely alive.
Nobody can help me now.
I keep wishing that I'd die.
The darkness overtakes me.
All the love I have is sucked away.
I can not stop this evil,
It will not go away.
All the warm feelings I used to have
are broken on the floor.
I know all hope is gone now,
my soul is lost forevermore. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 506 [topic] => 13 [informant] => sublime_suicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Those Dark Feelings...

Contributed by sublime_suicide on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I realize the demons have posessed me again.
My head is throbbing, my ears are pounding.
All of a sudden I can hear the silence.
All of a sudden I can see what's invisible.
My nightmares are coming true.
The darkness is spreading to all corners of the room.
What little comfort I have left vanishes
as my last candle flickers and dies.
I'm too afraid to move, too afraid to cry.
All I can feel is the cold.
All I can see is the dark.
It's like a thousand hands are touching me
And I feel like I'm barely alive.
Nobody can help me now.
I keep wishing that I'd die.
The darkness overtakes me.
All the love I have is sucked away.
I can not stop this evil,
It will not go away.
All the warm feelings I used to have
are broken on the floor.
I know all hope is gone now,
my soul is lost forevermore.

Copyright © sublime_suicide ... [ 2003-03-26 07:35:00]
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Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:49:28 AM AEST
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this is amazing...i know exactly how you feel...beautiful...

Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:58:16 PM AEST
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well written i can feel your pain...please hang in there your talent needs to be shared with others who feel the same

Sharon

Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:49:51 PM AEST
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I liked this poem very much, full of emotion, and very creative.
Great job
-kelysha

Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:50:03 PM AEST
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I liked this poem very much, full of emotion, and very creative.
Great job
-kelly

Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:49:52 PM AEST
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this is so sad, but a powerful write.
know exactly where you're coming from, PM me if u ever feel like a chat
x_x_x

Re: Those Dark Feelings... (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 03:00:52 PM AEST
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:)

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