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Array ( [sid] => 149257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 3 AM [time] => 2009-04-20 04:23:53 [hometext] => I wrote this late one night...that's where I got the creative title. Anyways, I was just getting used to being at school and kind of upset about the way things were going for me. This was one of my positive forms of release... [bodytext] => She’s a broken girl,
But they’ve heard that before,
In the city, a new world,
All alone

Disheartened and removed,
It’s her fault they pass,
Not even a glance,
It’s okay

Sick of it?
She knows what sick is,
Now they look at her,
Too late

Love will come with beauty,
She’s so blind,
One too many sleepless nights,
All in vain

Pace the floor one more time,
It counts for nothing,
So much for homework,
Give up

She misses the people she loves,
They’ve moved on,
She sings a favorite song,
Last time

Happiness finally comes,
Silent, sleeping girl,
No more pain or self to blame,
She’s gone [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 32 [informant] => laddie3319 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

3 AM

Contributed by laddie3319 on Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 04:23:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She’s a broken girl,
But they’ve heard that before,
In the city, a new world,
All alone

Disheartened and removed,
It’s her fault they pass,
Not even a glance,
It’s okay

Sick of it?
She knows what sick is,
Now they look at her,
Too late

Love will come with beauty,
She’s so blind,
One too many sleepless nights,
All in vain

Pace the floor one more time,
It counts for nothing,
So much for homework,
Give up

She misses the people she loves,
They’ve moved on,
She sings a favorite song,
Last time

Happiness finally comes,
Silent, sleeping girl,
No more pain or self to blame,
She’s gone

Copyright Â© laddie3319 ... [ 2009-04-20 04:23:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 3 AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Derrewyn on Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 04:42:17 AM AEST
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I really liked this one, it reminds me of a girl I knew. I find the night to be an ideal time for writing, and your poem shows it. Very beautiful...

Re: 3 AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 03:41:56 PM AEST
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powerfully sad, good work.

-phil

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