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[title] => HELP ME!!!
[time] => 2003-03-26 05:35:00
[hometext] => This is a poem asking for someone to help me keep going.
[bodytext] => What would you have told me yesterday,
If you knew that I would kill myself today?
If I wasn't here tomorrow,
What would you have to say?
I need a reason to keep living,
But there is so much pain inside,
Would I still go to Heaven,
If I died by suicide?
Can you please help me,
I don't really want to leave,
But I can't keep going on,
Just wiping the tears on my sleeve.
Have you ever felt the emptiness inside,
When you care about someone with all your heart,
But you have no one to care for you,
And your life is falling apart?
If you want to tell me something,
You had better tell me now,
Because I won't be here much longer,
You might be able to save me somehow.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 505
[topic] => 36
[informant] => lil_jewel
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[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 9
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
HELP ME!!!
Contributed by
lil_jewel
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What would you have told me yesterday,
If you knew that I would kill myself today?
If I wasn't here tomorrow,
What would you have to say?
I need a reason to keep living,
But there is so much pain inside,
Would I still go to Heaven,
If I died by suicide?
Can you please help me,
I don't really want to leave,
But I can't keep going on,
Just wiping the tears on my sleeve.
Have you ever felt the emptiness inside,
When you care about someone with all your heart,
But you have no one to care for you,
And your life is falling apart?
If you want to tell me something,
You had better tell me now,
Because I won't be here much longer,
You might be able to save me somehow.
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lil_jewel
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2003-03-26 05:35:00]
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:30:22 AM AEST
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| Good Poem. lots of emotion. I think everyone feels this way at some point in our lives but there is always something deep within us that keeps us moving forward. Call it hope, call it what you would like but we all have that pull to keep searching, keep striving. You have it also. If you weren't here, we wouldn't be able to read your wonderful poems..... |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:55:51 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM!!! I like the idea of asking someone what they would have said to you yesterday if they had known that you would not be here today. It is a very powerful piece of writing. Great work.
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:10:13 PM AEST
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great write powerful emotion...i have been there feeling lost and wanting only to die...but your talent alone is a reason to stay with us..we need to hear more from you
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:36:30 PM AEST
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| Jewel,I dont know really how or what I can say to change your mind only that life will get better I know it seems as though it isnt now but it will! Time heals all the pain!Suicide isnt always the answer I believe Those who take there life will be back on Earth to live it out again! So try to fix the problem now! God Bless! Christina |
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by Jester on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:14:12 PM AEST
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I have asked myself before who would cry at my funeral, or who would actually care, I have waited for people to say words to cheer me up only to get silence as they do see or hear my pain. Your poem captures these type of emotions for me with such a vivd power, you are a very talented writer with a gift to put your thoughts to words i hope that this is but a manifestation of thoughts that where moving through your mind and not a goodbye. I look forward to more of your works.
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by Jester on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:19:34 PM AEST
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I have asked myself before who would cry at my funeral, or who would actually care, I have waited for people to say words to cheer me up only to get silence as they do see or hear my pain. Your poem captures these type of emotions for me with such a vivd power, you are a very talented writer with a gift to put your thoughts to words i hope that this is but a manifestation of thoughts that where moving through your mind and not a goodbye. I look forward to more of your works.
Jimmy |
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by Jester on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:19:34 PM AEST
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I have asked myself before who would cry at my funeral, or who would actually care, I have waited for people to say words to cheer me up only to get silence as they do see or hear my pain. Your poem captures these type of emotions for me with such a vivd power, you are a very talented writer with a gift to put your thoughts to words i hope that this is but a manifestation of thoughts that where moving through your mind and not a goodbye. I look forward to more of your works.
Jimmy |
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Re: HELP ME!!!
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by Jester on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:51:38 PM AEST
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sorry about the triple postig my computer went psycho
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