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I yell and yell
from the confines of my cell
I keep thinking god will help me reveal
But as I yell and yell
My voice gets weak
I wait for the voice of god to help me speak
nothing ever comes
So I’m stuck here
still you hear me yell and yell
but this time I just know to wait
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I yell and yell

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:53:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I’m not telling you not to believe in god do what you want these are just my thoughts ignore them embrace them whatever in the end it’s always comes down to one thing the fact of who’s right. If I’m wrong I’ll gratefully admit it but for now this is what I think

I yell and yell
from the confines of my cell
I keep thinking god will help me reveal
But as I yell and yell
My voice gets weak
I wait for the voice of god to help me speak
nothing ever comes
So I’m stuck here
still you hear me yell and yell
but this time I just know to wait
god doesn’t care I’m going to hell

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-04-17 22:53:19]
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Re: I yell and yell (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 11:26:14 AM AEST
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If your going to hell then I think God does care.

That is;
1. Care enough to send you to hell or
2. To show a sign of light that somehow you have seen that stops you from going to hell.

Your write will challenge many to think

Peter

Re: I yell and yell (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:49:08 PM AEST
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With poetry there is no right or wrong...it is an expression of self. What I wonder about your poem is if you speak of a physical cell or an emotional cell? But again, does it really matter? To feel locked up or to be locked up can bring about the same thoughts of anguish.

I can relate to the yelling and yelling. There are times when I have done so myself. Wondering if I will ever be heard!

As far as God goes, I think there is always help for us. And hell can be avoided easily enough.

Thank you for sharing and may expressing yourself bring you some peace.

Carol

Re: I yell and yell (User Rating: 1 )
by BoscoMelano on Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 12:08:15 AM AEST
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I feel like you are really only yelling in your mind. Like you want to go to hell. You want to punish yourself. I don't know.

Re: I yell and yell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 07:35:58 AM AEST
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What that line from that silly movie....?
Something like...."Sometimes the answer is no."
All things have a reason, we just may never understand what it is.
Great thought provoking piece.

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