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Could You Be The One
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Could you open your eyes, see what's in front of you Could you let me inside, maybe try something new Because you are the one, in my dreams, every night When I close my eyes, you're the one in the light Could you be there in the dark; could you be my sun Because I need to know... Could you be the one...?
I know I'm not the prettiest girl around And better than me can be found But you say I'm beautiful, you say it's true And I don't want anyone else; ask me if I could be the one too!
Because you are that one, in every wish I make When I close my eyes, dream of you, but then I wake Thinking could you be the one in my room; but there's none I miss you so much, and I need to know Could you be the one Cause I don't want to run Into a stranger's arms... Could you be the one?
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-04-03 15:22:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:58:29 PM AEST (User
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a very sweet passionate poem. a vastly enjoyable read!
-phil |
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Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 11:23:10 PM AEST (User
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This is really beautifull as it speaks to the heart.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:33:24 PM AEST (User
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This has a nice flow to the rhymes.
I like the sentiment too. |
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