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stretch in the bed
stare out into space
and wonder if I am dead,
I am so bored
I feel so sad
I got no real friends
and I'm always mad.
everyday I do the same thing
time moves on slowly
I dangle on the edge
as I battle with emotions,
what is my purpose
there is no way of knowing
my wounds seem to never heal
the blood keeps on flowing.

I don't want but I need
to understand
why I never seem to know
what I'm doing,
I open my eyes
to see
if I am asleep
then I close my eyes
and dream of being awake.
EMOTIONS EXPLODE
my bloods flows
and I surf
the dark lava
on wounds that are never healing.
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Emotional Warfare

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 10:48:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I wake up and I yawn
stretch in the bed
stare out into space
and wonder if I am dead,
I am so bored
I feel so sad
I got no real friends
and I'm always mad.
everyday I do the same thing
time moves on slowly
I dangle on the edge
as I battle with emotions,
what is my purpose
there is no way of knowing
my wounds seem to never heal
the blood keeps on flowing.

I don't want but I need
to understand
why I never seem to know
what I'm doing,
I open my eyes
to see
if I am asleep
then I close my eyes
and dream of being awake.
EMOTIONS EXPLODE
my bloods flows
and I surf
the dark lava
on wounds that are never healing.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2009-03-19 10:48:26]
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Re: Emotional Warfare (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 11:10:47 AM AEST
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awake or dreaming you are conscious of your wounds.. and you feel the explosion
of emotions...I understand your feeling of lonliness.. Well expressed emotinal write.
I wish peace and happiness to you!
venkat

Re: Emotional Warfare (User Rating: 1 )
by leopardpie on Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 12:09:19 PM AEST
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kinda dark and interesting hope you get over your emotional time

Re: Emotional Warfare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 04:32:30 PM AEST
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Ya know, I really like this.

Except for the last few lines, I have so thought these same thoughts. Very well done and it just flowed so easily as I read it.

KEW-EL :-)

Tim

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