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Black days
Contributed by
Vic
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Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A miracle is like rain
On a hot summers day
That evaporates without touching the ground
Your joy and warmth
Are quickly taken away
And your heart is again in sorrows bound.
You know sometimes I wish
That God gave up His throne
And tried to live a life of a troubled man
Hell regret for what he'd done
For Hed be all alone
Crying for many and Himself; and His unwise plan
A tested and tired mans tear
On a lonely summers night
Erupts out of his eye without a sound
Youth and strength gone by
To revive his dreams hed fight
God refuses to be man; my happiness is yet to be found.
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Vic
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2009-03-16 02:23:39]
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Re: Black days
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:56:10 AM AEST
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Your sadness well expressed..I can hear the sound of the eruption of a lonely tear.
Silence is there.. venkat |
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Re: Black days
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 07:28:53 AM AEST
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very deep and emotive. it poses so many questions to the reader. great work.
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Re: Black days
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 05:55:47 PM AEST
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extraordinary and sad...i like how u incorporated the supernatural and comparing/contrasting the life of God and the life of man. That really dictates a lot. great write, take care
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