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Array ( [sid] => 148361 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Know [time] => 2009-03-07 14:10:16 [hometext] => This was written a long time ago and it was about my best friend, we were so close until someone told him how I used to feel about him [bodytext] => As I sit here listening to
60’s songs, I know in my heart
you and I will never be
as close as we once were

In a moment, foolish but heartfelt
our friendship was destroyed
now we barely speak
you don’t acknowledge me

I know you care or you wouldn’t
hurt like this
I know you more than you know me
it hurts that you would listen
to another.

I know now more than ever
our friendship is lost forever
all because of a foolish and heartfelt moment
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mooshken26 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I Know

Contributed by mooshken26 on Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 02:10:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

As I sit here listening to
60’s songs, I know in my heart
you and I will never be
as close as we once were

In a moment, foolish but heartfelt
our friendship was destroyed
now we barely speak
you don’t acknowledge me

I know you care or you wouldn’t
hurt like this
I know you more than you know me
it hurts that you would listen
to another.

I know now more than ever
our friendship is lost forever
all because of a foolish and heartfelt moment

Copyright Â© mooshken26 ... [ 2009-03-07 14:10:16]
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Re: I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 09:32:07 AM AEST
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the meaning in this piece was brought out well. the last 2 of the 4 parts, it got alittle shaky with the flow. nothing creative caught my eye in this piece but i felt where you was coming from

7/10 goodwrite

Re: I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 08:21:13 AM AEST
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This brought a tear to my eye and put a lump in my throat not only because it's nicely written but also because I can relate to it so much. I don't know why there are people that would prefer to listen to others about you instead of you yourself but there just are. *sigh*

Anyway, nice poem but sorry you had to go through that.

Take care,

Tim

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