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Fireworks
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 11:24:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Evil genius devising a unstable shell for cupid
A new design to bring love and blow to guide
Elegance by one unexpected by the opposite
Understanding words and actions will be clouded
Ffffffff ssssssssssshhh flickering lights sparkling fireworks
Mounted on the ground of our feets,
glazing up above our heights, saddling up on this explosive
Ready for the launch like a brand new year
The lit match stick burned like a surge
Fuse was a delay unlike today, prepared to detonate
We are a pair like powder embedded with bursting charges
Our direction is sky high, continue going straight
Riding it beyond the borders like a stallion on rockets
The crowd is like a wild sparkler
There cheers flew entertainingly bright through,
As we approach to the finish line we Boom into our honey moon
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2009-02-24 11:24:41]
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Re: Fireworks
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 04:42:15 PM AEST
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crackling metaphors in this one, great work.
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