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Loneliness
Contributed by
Diva5
on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have nobody to hold by my side
Runnin around trying to find my way in
There are two strong warriors who wont let go
Im lonely
Loneliness.Loneliness
Im in a dark hole all alone
With nobody to hold
Wrapped up scared and angered
of whats going to happen
Am I in or out
Or will I find my way in.
Im lonely
Loneliness..Loneliness
I see the light bringing me in
Hoping I will make it in
Im an outcast with no friends
I need somebody to talk to
But I dont
Will I get a friend?
Or will I still me lonely?
Im lonely
Loneliness..Loneliness
Finally it comes to an end
I find a friend
Who will take me in
With joy and laughter Im finally in
Im shouting with happiness now I have a friend
Who understands, cares, and loves
Im not lonely anymore
Loneliness..Loneliness
Copyright ©
Diva5
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2009-02-23 16:00:25]
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Re: Loneliness
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:13:01 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt write but you are not alone, i am only a stranger but i am willing to be your friend i hold no grudge i have fallen many times myself and am not afraid to admit my faults.
i am again but a stranger but willing to give you a ear if you need it. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:55:04 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to the start of this poem. However even when i do find a friend, I have to leave them so I am stuck in that cycle of lonliness..
Awesome write! |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 07:55:20 AM AEST
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very heartfelt write, well done.
-phil |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Jlokitty on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:16:55 PM AEST
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i can totally relate to this... great poem...
you are not alone |
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