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~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:34:33 PM in AEST
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Patriotic
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~~^~~
Its finally here!
Carnival is one big lime
Our island goes wild
Anticipating
The freedom of carnival
Of two fun filled days
Splendor of the sun
Faces of pure ecstasy
In sweltering heat
Steel-pan music plays
Revelers flooding the streets
Jumping to the beat
Masqueraders wine
Skimpy costumes seems a must
Nakedness abounds.
A sea of color
Brilliant blues and raging reds
All blended as one
Saturday before
Children have their special day
All join in the fun.
Few days earlier
The competitions took place
Winners celebrate.
Calypso was sweet
Alcohol gone to their heads
Time for the last lap
At midnight Tuesday
Euphoria will be over
We return to life
~~^~~
lime- Party
wine- the local word for gyrate
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2009-02-21 12:34:33]
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:56:12 PM AEST
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Good work girlfriend.
Sounds like lotssa fun.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:31:42 PM AEST
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Having watched some of this last night I can relate more to it. Definitely some brilliant colors. Thanks for clearing up the "lime" & "wine" references...lol....I was sorta cornfused. :-)
Anywho... nice lil tribute you got goin' on here. I like the imagery.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 07:13:28 PM AEST
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sounds like a good time! you described it so well with your words, i was almost there!
-phil |
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by venkat on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 04:53:41 AM AEST
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Once upon a time I saw those masqueraders with faces of pure ecstasy..
in a rio carnival..in one of the news chanels.
Then I studied the background of that culture also, though I forgot what I read.
..Thanks Jenni, for sharing this. :-)venkat |
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 10:18:51 AM AEST
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| this sounds a lot amusing. i really wanted something to amuse me by and this was it. keep on writing |
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Re: ~The Sights And Sounds Of Carnival~
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by kye on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 01:20:02 PM AEST
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In my mind, I was there! It must be wondrous, fun, colorful and with laughter and smiles everywhere!
Your mind is so broad in it's ability to write. You can write something sad and I tear up, write something sensitve and my heart pulls toward the words and write something with flourish and I sit and smile--seeing it my mind and wishing carnival was in my world..
I can never see room for improvement in your poetry. I guess I just see a really talented person, with many years experience whom I like to read.
And, I did like this one. :)
Kie |
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