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Array ( [sid] => 147864 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give Up [time] => 2009-02-09 08:28:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wanted to give up
all greed and lust
and forget the pain
that I got from the past

the truth felt so bitter
which I tried to deny
but felt it every time
when I tried to lie

every sorrow that I got
echoed in my face
but I tried to smile
thinking of new days

everything I did
pretending not to fake
I failed every time
for all my mistakes

only I faked to be glad
which I was not any way
all the words that i had
could I never even say

and grieves of past
still reflects through life
blackness of truth
makes my heart to thrive

when I stand when I try
blood refuse to flow through my vein
makes me to cry and
give up hope once again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 21 [informant] => navidguru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Give Up

Contributed by navidguru on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 08:28:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I wanted to give up
all greed and lust
and forget the pain
that I got from the past

the truth felt so bitter
which I tried to deny
but felt it every time
when I tried to lie

every sorrow that I got
echoed in my face
but I tried to smile
thinking of new days

everything I did
pretending not to fake
I failed every time
for all my mistakes

only I faked to be glad
which I was not any way
all the words that i had
could I never even say

and grieves of past
still reflects through life
blackness of truth
makes my heart to thrive

when I stand when I try
blood refuse to flow through my vein
makes me to cry and
give up hope once again

Copyright © navidguru ... [ 2009-02-09 08:28:08]
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Re: Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 12:57:07 PM AEST
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it was fairly simple, there was no originality in this piece. it was Ok the flow went off at the end of each verse

Re: Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ChiChizZle on Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 07:48:25 AM AEST
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so is it happy ending or a sad ending?

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