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Array ( [sid] => 147739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Stream of Consciousness.. [time] => 2009-02-01 14:46:45 [hometext] => Dedicated to my 'Mei- Yiem'(Royal Mother in Khasi Language) Dr. Bluebell Syiem Standal, a Lady of Royalty from Meghalaya,the Abode of the Clouds. [bodytext] => A Stream of Consciousness

Aeons ago..
In some other space and time
when there was
no existence
of You,
though
in spirit You
might
have been..

But know
that I existed
then
yearning,
I was
in the realm
of Alakapuri
amidst a magical lake,
Lake Manos Saravar
an abode of swans
with wings gossamer
illumined by
the
iridescent moon and
celestial stars..

Longing..
Kalidasa’s Megha-Dootam
the Messenger Cloud
messages, amourous on
billowing clouds
heaped upon
rain soaked
monsoon
clouds..

Could it
perhaps be
in serendipity
I was the secret
surreptitious throb
seated
at Shakuntala’s
heart?

Suffering angst
of separation
pining
awaiting
at the foot
of Meghalaya
‘Abode of the Clouds'..
dipping..
Lac-tainted delicate
lotus feet
in the meandering
mirrored
Jaflong stream
a mellifluous song..
reflecting
darkened pools, brimming
doe-like eyes..

There were whispers
in the wind
that no mortal
was I, that
I alighted
from Heavens
a Nymph
to be seated
in the heart
of Beloveds
they said..

A delightful mystery
in years to come
impassioned transient
intangible
elusive,
the Golden Fawn
passing through
Time in
a Wispy
Dreamlike
trance..
**^*^..
Dilrubay

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A Stream of Consciousness..

Contributed by dilrubay on Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 02:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A Stream of Consciousness

Aeons ago..
In some other space and time
when there was
no existence
of You,
though
in spirit You
might
have been..

But know
that I existed
then
yearning,
I was
in the realm
of Alakapuri
amidst a magical lake,
Lake Manos Saravar
an abode of swans
with wings gossamer
illumined by
the
iridescent moon and
celestial stars..

Longing..
Kalidasa’s Megha-Dootam
the Messenger Cloud
messages, amourous on
billowing clouds
heaped upon
rain soaked
monsoon
clouds..

Could it
perhaps be
in serendipity
I was the secret
surreptitious throb
seated
at Shakuntala’s
heart?

Suffering angst
of separation
pining
awaiting
at the foot
of Meghalaya
‘Abode of the Clouds'..
dipping..
Lac-tainted delicate
lotus feet
in the meandering
mirrored
Jaflong stream
a mellifluous song..
reflecting
darkened pools, brimming
doe-like eyes..

There were whispers
in the wind
that no mortal
was I, that
I alighted
from Heavens
a Nymph
to be seated
in the heart
of Beloveds
they said..

A delightful mystery
in years to come
impassioned transient
intangible
elusive,
the Golden Fawn
passing through
Time in
a Wispy
Dreamlike
trance..
**^*^..
Dilrubay

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Re: A Stream of Consciousness.. (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 04:25:14 PM AEST
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I need to really concentrate to read this and I can't because of my kids so I will have to come back later and comment again after I have managed to read it sorry.

Re: A Stream of Consciousness.. (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 11:24:37 PM AEST
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With a hope to read some brilliant poetry,
I am frequenting this site..
I am happy to find this stream of conciousness on this day..
Very beautiful..I am delighted to read this.
Best of luck..:-) venkat

Re: A Stream of Consciousness.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shuronjona on Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 11:56:30 PM AEST
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My Dear meghoboti,
It is a great poem.
Alakapuri, Manos Saravar, Swans, sakuntala.......
how sweet your thouught. feelings........
thanx komolaboti.......

Re: A Stream of Consciousness.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 04:18:35 PM AEST
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wow! you introduced me to beautiful places like megahalaya and lake manas sarovor and you engraciated my conscious with beautiful writing. this is the type of poetry that i appreciate. simply brilliant.

-phil

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