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Array ( [sid] => 147679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Hiding In The Shadows... [time] => 2009-01-27 23:44:32 [hometext] => I don't normally write in this style... It's a bit different for me - kind of. Advice is, of course, greatly appreciated. [bodytext] => I'm hiding in the shadows of this willow tree
Watching you rest your weary eyes in the meadows sunlight
The shade is my protection, it blocks me from your view
You're just out of reach, darling...
Wherever you are
Lost inside your dream
Floating above space
Honey, look, I see you there

A barrier blocking me; sunlight
I'll dig myself underground and find a forgotten cave
If only you could be searching through these shadows for me, too
We breathe the same air
Go meet me there
We can be together

Wake up, my love
Let me sing you this song
The wind is my voice
The birds carry to you my tune
The dew from the morning air is for my lonely tear
Wake up and open those drowsy eyes
You're just out of reach...

Come hide with me
Let's hide from the sun, darling dear
Cool off in the shade of this weeping willow...
I miss you

You can find me here
Gazing at you from the shadows of this old willow tree
Searching for an answer
Sweetie, open those gorgeous eyes
I wish you were here
Under my aching arms
So lovely... You're everything I need
Everything I could ever want
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I'm Hiding In The Shadows...

Contributed by thelostpuppet on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 11:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I'm hiding in the shadows of this willow tree
Watching you rest your weary eyes in the meadows sunlight
The shade is my protection, it blocks me from your view
You're just out of reach, darling...
Wherever you are
Lost inside your dream
Floating above space
Honey, look, I see you there

A barrier blocking me; sunlight
I'll dig myself underground and find a forgotten cave
If only you could be searching through these shadows for me, too
We breathe the same air
Go meet me there
We can be together

Wake up, my love
Let me sing you this song
The wind is my voice
The birds carry to you my tune
The dew from the morning air is for my lonely tear
Wake up and open those drowsy eyes
You're just out of reach...

Come hide with me
Let's hide from the sun, darling dear
Cool off in the shade of this weeping willow...
I miss you

You can find me here
Gazing at you from the shadows of this old willow tree
Searching for an answer
Sweetie, open those gorgeous eyes
I wish you were here
Under my aching arms
So lovely... You're everything I need
Everything I could ever want
Come back to me




Copyright © thelostpuppet ... [ 2009-01-27 23:44:32]
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Re: I'm Hiding In The Shadows... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 12:04:38 AM AEST
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Well this is a very beautiful write any way you look at it.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy


Re: I'm Hiding In The Shadows... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 11:54:47 AM AEST
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a very beautiful poem. the imagery was marvellous and the message was heartfelt. great writing.

-phil


Re: I'm Hiding In The Shadows... (User Rating: 1 )
by kismetkills on Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 09:49:41 PM AEST
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this is written really well, and i think it's something most can relate to. great job!


Re: I'm Hiding In The Shadows... (User Rating: 1 )
by ginabelle on Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written...Very descriptive imagery. Nice!


Re: I'm Hiding In The Shadows... (User Rating: 1 )
by razorbladekisses on Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 01:09:31 AM AEST
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I really liked this. As someone before me said, it's something most can relate to. It's good. I look forward to reading more of your work.




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