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Made anger is her own boss

Just caught in thinking, there's no way out
Being disappointed, the only thing she cares about

So bad to feel unloved, so hurt to be unwanted
As always her dreams, family try to avoid it

No one listen hear or care, always there's silence...
And when she does wrong, they meet her with violence

Bad when a human with talents hide behind the fears
Worse when there's always no one to wash your tears

Worst the sequences that focus on depression
The feeling of being ashamed to make your own decision

Except when your mind rash to the negative side
As this pretty teen rash to suicide....

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Suicidal Spirit

Contributed by sbs on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Feeling of rejection, hurt and loss
Made anger is her own boss

Just caught in thinking, there's no way out
Being disappointed, the only thing she cares about

So bad to feel unloved, so hurt to be unwanted
As always her dreams, family try to avoid it

No one listen hear or care, always there's silence...
And when she does wrong, they meet her with violence

Bad when a human with talents hide behind the fears
Worse when there's always no one to wash your tears

Worst the sequences that focus on depression
The feeling of being ashamed to make your own decision

Except when your mind rash to the negative side
As this pretty teen rash to suicide....

Copyright © sbs ... [ 2009-01-24 00:25:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicidal Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by moumita on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:39:18 PM AEST
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there are two tragedies in life ,
one is not to get your heart desire
and the other is to get it !

no reason to be dishearten .
nice one
keep it up aapu ..

Re: Suicidal Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 11:12:05 PM AEST
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Great write but no reason for suicide I've thought about it myself...but there's always something to listen to care you may think they don't care but some where someone will care and listen to your problems in life
I will if you want I'm always willing to help
hope you feel better soon
-Kelly

Re: Suicidal Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 02:18:43 PM AEST
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the paradox of life. . . one constant. . .
everything changes.
just breath. sit back. become aware.
fulfill your purpose, as individual & beautiful
as you surely are, inside & out.
don't say good-bye. be determined to live life
to the fullest. become excellent. . . kiss the sky.
we are never alone. peace. elle

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