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Array ( [sid] => 147282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leave My Heart [time] => 2009-01-06 20:46:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you care
but not about me
so when i relay every detail
i'll leave you out

one piece cracked
and the whole wall came down
you were lost in the wreckage
i heard you perished

risks you once would've taken
now completely out of the question
i never blamed you then
now i feel betrayed

we carried the secret for so long
it came down to the very absolute,
and i never thought
you'd be the one to fracture

i had hesitant faith in you
never wanted to doubt you
i held on so long
my dreams became ashes

and now you can't find the words
you speak only blades
i search for the least-pathetic remarks
sometimes i think it works

the summer still seems fictitious
we never existed,
only nightly in my dreams
we're so drastically distanced now

because you care,
but not about me
i pull off a smile even you believe
and i leave you out. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => anomalei [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Leave My Heart

Contributed by anomalei on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 08:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

you care
but not about me
so when i relay every detail
i'll leave you out

one piece cracked
and the whole wall came down
you were lost in the wreckage
i heard you perished

risks you once would've taken
now completely out of the question
i never blamed you then
now i feel betrayed

we carried the secret for so long
it came down to the very absolute,
and i never thought
you'd be the one to fracture

i had hesitant faith in you
never wanted to doubt you
i held on so long
my dreams became ashes

and now you can't find the words
you speak only blades
i search for the least-pathetic remarks
sometimes i think it works

the summer still seems fictitious
we never existed,
only nightly in my dreams
we're so drastically distanced now

because you care,
but not about me
i pull off a smile even you believe
and i leave you out.

Copyright © anomalei ... [ 2009-01-06 20:46:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Leave My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 11:59:22 PM AEST
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Yes heart can be leaved alone, if you want, but ask the heart if it wants to be alone?

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