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is to find passion and love to late
singing with a "China mic
and this old American guitar,
a needful thing is to stay close and warm.

It all comes back, the reckless days
when We sold them "two for "one,
never growing up the way it was intended
the world made sure you are not who you were.

The gallant We strap on,
We found from some dirty gutter,
polish it and trying to make it our own,
shouting for attention, then passing it along
legends are so hard to hang on too.

The burden and bundle are heavy,
but reminders "mark our place,
celebrate in droves, kicking through the "clutter,
bargaining "two for "one....Vincent
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Two for One

Contributed by crow on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 01:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

What I don`t want
is to find passion and love to late
singing with a "China mic
and this old American guitar,
a needful thing is to stay close and warm.

It all comes back, the reckless days
when We sold them "two for "one,
never growing up the way it was intended
the world made sure you are not who you were.

The gallant We strap on,
We found from some dirty gutter,
polish it and trying to make it our own,
shouting for attention, then passing it along
legends are so hard to hang on too.

The burden and bundle are heavy,
but reminders "mark our place,
celebrate in droves, kicking through the "clutter,
bargaining "two for "one....Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2009-01-01 13:16:49]
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Re: Two for One (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 02:00:05 PM AEST
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This left such a sad note on my heart...
I really loved the way you wrote this
Every line seems to say so much more
Each time I read them
I could almost see it as a song
I hope you see brighter days
In your heart soon
Love Smiles Blessings to you Always
Kara

Re: Two for One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 03:19:28 PM AEST
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''the world made sure you are not who you were.''

That hit me hard... in a good way of course.

This is beautiful,

Re: Two for One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 05:46:21 PM AEST
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good work again vincent. you are very very talented. good work.

-phil

Re: Two for One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 08:34:02 PM AEST
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Metaphoric excellence that seem to spell out our life's desires and lost dreams. Very good my friend.

Re: Two for One (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:42:39 AM AEST
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Ok fell off sleeper bed again! What the hell you doing to me man??

Ok rubs knees and head...

Lane, goodness great balls of fire. I am on fire reading this. Passion so full of heart and depth.

More more

hug n kissy poo
love ya

In Atlanta!! Heading for Tampa whoooooo

Shall

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