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Array ( [sid] => 14714 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Goodbye, Best Friend [time] => 2003-03-22 06:05:00 [hometext] => About a friend of 4 years that decided to blow up at me one night and we've never spoken since. [bodytext] => If I told you what you meant to me,
would you listen?
would you care?
would you answer me?
Or leave.
Would you walk away as if you never knew me?
Am I that worthless?
Am I not good enough for you?
Are you listening?
Do meaningless words come out of my mouth?
Do I know you anymore?
Do you remember me?
DoI portrat nothing in your eyes?
Or something.

Do you care?
No.
I'm a stranger to you.
You're a stranger to me.
Goodbye, best friend. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Hoping_To_Be_Me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Goodbye, Best Friend

Contributed by Hoping_To_Be_Me on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

If I told you what you meant to me,
would you listen?
would you care?
would you answer me?
Or leave.
Would you walk away as if you never knew me?
Am I that worthless?
Am I not good enough for you?
Are you listening?
Do meaningless words come out of my mouth?
Do I know you anymore?
Do you remember me?
DoI portrat nothing in your eyes?
Or something.

Do you care?
No.
I'm a stranger to you.
You're a stranger to me.
Goodbye, best friend.

Copyright © Hoping_To_Be_Me ... [ 2003-03-22 06:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 06:12:55 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you lost your best friend. This is so sad, but very well written. Your friend, Dot

Re: Goodbye, Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoping_To_Be_Me on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:23:03 PM AEST
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hey thanks for all the comments! i'm glad someone reads and likes them!

Re: Goodbye, Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:32:16 PM AEST
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For that person to lose you they should be banished to a dumpster alive though! lol! Haveing a friend that is a poet is the best friend you could ever have! Better hunting next time! lol!

Re: Goodbye, Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:20:22 PM AEST
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Another poem I can relate too!! Great write...!!
<3 Sara

Re: Goodbye, Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 09:10:10 PM AEST
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i think if this was your best friend that she would try to wake something out. i know i would. if i could help my best friend but shes to busy with her new baby

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